How to Write a College Essay About Your Passion Project
- BetterMind Labs

- Jun 17
- 3 min read
Updated: Aug 19
Why Essays Matter in College Admissions

Essays are no longer a luxury. In an environment where thousands of applicants can have identical GPAs and test scores, essays are now the most individualized, unique aspect of your application.
Admissions officers need to know not only what you have done, but why, how you think, and what motivates you. The Common App says essays assist in highlighting qualities such as intellectual curiosity, creativity, and resilience, which no transcript can capture. For the student applying to competitive schools, a great essay can make all the difference.
What Are Passion Projects?
A passion project is an independent project based on personal enthusiasm. It's something you work on because you want to, not because you have to. Passion projects can be artistic, scientific, entrepreneurial, or service-based. What they all share is genuineness.
Examples include:
AI Model to Identify Brain Tumors Based on Medical Imaging Datasets
Wildfire Prediction Tool developed with satellite imagery and machine learning
Stock Market Predictor from historical financial data and Python
At BetterMind Labs, students venture into projects that bridge AI and their interests. A highlight: a student who was interested in neuroscience and healthcare created a dual-model AI system to identify brain tumors based on both MRI scans and clinical information. The project involved months of mentoring, several rounds of iteration, and even explainability testing.
He didn't do it to win a science fair; he did it because his cousin had previously been misdiagnosed. That's what made his eventual college essay so strong: it was personal, technically impressive, and emotionally rooted.
Why Passion Projects Make Great College Essay Topics
Passion projects naturally provide:
A strong narrative
Evidence of initiative and perseverance
A deep exploration of an area that defines you
Practical applicability and concrete results
This comes in handy, particularly when applying for competitive fields of study in CS, engineering, pre-med, or interdisciplinary fields. Institutions like Stanford, MIT, and Duke value when a student extends learning from the classroom and chronicles that experience with coherence and intention.
How to Write a College Essay Around Your Passion Project

Here's a basic template you can use:
1. Start With the Spark
How did it start? What motivated you? This might be a personal experience, a social issue that matters to you, or a class moment that spawned investigation.
Example: "When my cousin's seizure went undiagnosed due to lack of access to MRI interpretation in rural clinics, I started wondering how technology could close that diagnostic gap."
2. Reveal the Process
Don't merely describe the result. Reveal the messy middle:
The late nights spent reading research papers
The coding bugs that you couldn't squash
The mentor who pushed your assumptions
That moment when things started to click
"After weeks of model accuracy failures, I realized training models for image and tabular data separately got better results, and the day it passed 85% accuracy was the day I felt like a real researcher."
3. Highlight What You Learned
Your essay must reflect growth. What did you learn about:
Yourself?
Your discipline?
The world? This brings maturity and introspection to your story.
"I learned that great AI isn't about flashy models, it's about data integrity, bias mitigation, and human impact. That mindset now guides everything I build."
4. Tie It Back to Your Future
Keep it future-oriented. How will this project (and all you learned from it) inform your aspirations in college and beyond?
"Now, I'd like to pursue computer science and neuroscience studies, and focus on making early detection tools more accessible for low-resource communities."
Final Thoughts
Understanding how to craft a college essay about your passion project can lift your entire application. It's not bragging. It's storytelling — showing who you are through what you are passionate about and what you've created.
If your project was in AI, activism, art, or architecture, whatever it was, if it was important to you, it is important to the reader.
If you're still seeking ways to take your passions and make something real out of them, look to mentorship platforms such as BetterMind Labs, where students create projects in anything from healthcare and finance to mental health and satellite imagery.
Begin with the curiosity. Let the passion drive your work. Then share the only story you can tell.
Relevant Links
The "Spiky" Profile and the Importance of Passion Projects:
What Admissions Officers Look for in College Essays:
Essay Examples and Prompts:













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